I wish the clouds had life...
i would have chatted with it whole day and night...
I wish d stars had a face....
I could see them always above me whatsoever my situation may be. . .
I wish this wind had voice that it could whisper me solacefull rhymes. .
I wish the water had the sense of touch so that it could have hold my hand 4revr. . .
I wish the trees could smile so i would remain smiling with them 4evr. . .
Ironically their are millions of humans on dis earth but still...
why i have no one to share. .
Still i have many known persons but no one to understand.......
13 comments:
hey hi m raman here her gud frn
well wot to say abt this gal
she is the best well m thanks to be god bcoz she is ma frn well m very happy to be ur frn n ya i m always wanna be ur gud frn well god kare ise kisi ki nazar na lage she have a gud se bhi jyada gud nature yaar
god bless u ma dear frn
always be happy
RAIN DANCE
AND RAIN SONGS
REPERTOIRE OF RAINDROPS.........
I WAIT,WAIT TO CATCH
TWO CHERRIES BLOSSOM
DEEP INSIDE YOUR DANCING EYES.........
DEAR.....our spectrum of inner self expresses the colour of our inner space.It carries the beauty of our mind body and soul.We love the beauty of this world and this universe.We love to live in a beautiful world where we can worship the beauty and the beholder...............rajib........a beautiful mind.....with Soul Curry......
kafi khubsurat tanhai hai aapki
kisi ki yaadein use aur khubsoorat banaye.....
well ..i m avinash frm ujjain...but now i m in mumbai..bahut aacha likhte hai aap
es tanhai main bhi kuch baat hai ...tabhi tu god aapke saath hai ....zindagi main kuch bhi hota hai ...hamesha aache ke liye hota hai ..bas yahi ek baat hamesha apne dimag main rakhana ok & be positive...bye & take care ...@avi
well just want to say tht its like i felt it and you put it in words. tell u when reader feels like this, poet should feel proud on his/her work.
hoooooooooo
ye umeed nahi thi mujhe aapse
aapne esa kase likh diya
ye likhne se phele aapko 1 bar bhi mera khayal nahi aaya haadd ho gaye hai ......
ye hi padhne ke liye mein ji rahe thi nahi bhagwan ye padhne ke phele aapne mujhe utha kyu nahi liya....
hoooooo di aapne mere ummede tor di hai ......
mein tut gaye hu ....
""""'why i have no one to share. .
Still i have many known persons but no one to understand.......""""""
ha ha ha
are mazak kar rahe hu yaar
aapne bahot hi achee poem likhi hai i m proud of u aakher big sis kiski hai meri na to aasar to aayega hi na mein itne intelligent hu to aapko bhi mera aasar to aayega hi na good i m really proud of u.....
from
chutki
hey iushee
the poem is fab yaar
its awesome.......
imagination is just superb & i really liked this 1 a lot!!!!
write down ur imagination always so that v can hv fun & b in ur imaginative world
Hey D...
Really fantastic yaar...ur imagination is really superb...Mainly those tagging up of things was awesome...I can learn a thing or two from u thats for sure....Hehe...
Just keep writing haan.....I'll keep an eye out for ur poems and all...
Waiting for the next one...
WHEN MOON DESCENDS TO HORIZON
I TURN TO A BUTTERFLY AND
PLAY HIDE AND SEEK IN CHERRY ORCHARD.........
HEY.........dear........lets go together.......to spread the scent of beauty.......the beauty of beautiful minds........rajib.........a beautiful mind......
diiii bhut hi bhadiya likha he splendid thinking vry good yrrrr
well ayushi keep it up uhve witten the lines beautifully......if u hve not copied.........hahaha just kiddin i knw u must hve not........i never knew u can write so well.........kk byeee hpe to see more frm u
kya?
Aapke doston aur jaan pehchan waalon ne to bohot taarif kar di aapki but seriously I am stranger to you and I also think its great ..I am myself a little bit of writer but I don't write poetry and I've been writing from past one year and I can say one thing out of experience that writing is a terrific hobby and after regular writing since a year I have become much better then what I was before .. So keep writing regularly ..and see yourself grow with time .
hi
thats a super poem by u yaar
it tells every thing about what every body mean to b
gud luck for more
n wana se more from u
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