Friday, July 25, 2008

The Untitled...


I am a countries hope!

Standing beside the road in dirty cloths,

With under-fed stomach and,

Skinny ribs to show…….

I am a homeless wanderer!

With street dogs as my only kith & kins,

With sore naked feet’s and,

Coal like tanned skin…….

I have no family tree!

Not even a mother to look up too,

In wintry nights I do miss her pious enclave,

And warm & affectionate womb……

I move about as a helpless creature!

Pitying about my hunger and asking for alms,

All I get is hatred but

What is my fault??

If I wasn’t nourished in a golden pram,

& brought up in luxuries and form…..

What can I do if my feet’s are

Not rooted with proper education,

& hence I deem to become

A frog in the well……..

I am an aimless fellow!

With no dreams to dream

I haven’t ever heard of Alice

& neither her Wonderland…..

Why all of you hate me?

For my poor condition

As I am definitely not the person to be blamed

And yet

Alas! You see a thousand’s of me

At each corner of the land.

By-

AYUSHI

The Illusionist

16 comments:

kriti said...

ayu nw dis is cald as smthin spellboudin ..ya tht level is rechin heights
"You see a thousand’s of me
At each corner of the land. "
dis is smthin mind bogglin u knw...

ppl shz juz marvelous juz xplain her

Sourabh said...

Hmmmm!!! Quite a touchy one...U really feel so or jst for da sake of writin?? Wanna do smthng real for them?? Vaise I appreciate tht u cn make ppl atleast think .... Gud gng..

arvind said...

Nice one!!! the best part is tht this poem will force ppl 2 think smthing after reading this poem..
i.e. smthing related 2 each human's life specially in our india....

Good.Keep it up.

Cheers!!!!!
Arvind

words nd me in ma world said...

du i hvtaa say nyfin??
jesus!!u shook ma soul yill depths..
u gt dis special quality 2 tame hearts wt words lemme tell dis 2 every1..hope v can do smthin fr ppl who realii need help..

RENZ said...

u like to hear abt u 4m ur friends na? good, anyway let me say "liku u , there z no one, u hav a special identity, just be happy always& have a heart of gold?


BEST OF LUCK

Shakti said...

good one

manas mishra said...

well good work.just have to say this much.

prachi said...

A nice one....Really touchyyy

Shiv said...

Well...there it goes...I dont have words to define my thoughts now...Uncool yet really upto the situation....

Never knew there is someone more thoughful than me...hehe...

Anyway, this one is really Nice, Awesome, Touchy for sure, and ya best to make people think about those whom they ignore for reasons-unworthy...

The way u wrote it down is really B-E-A-Utiful...Just keep going...

pawan said...

quite emotional....but u really mean all that or just written for good comments..

but anyways i appreciate ur thoughts....

appu said...

Awesome its really awesome!!! great work

Shawn Michel de Montaigne said...

A nice blog here, full of heartfelt poetry.

My best to its continued success!

Ramesh said...

The thoughts are nice.

ADITYARAJ said...

mannn....

u lft me speachless....
good goin buddy...

keep up d good wrk!!!

Amritt Rukhaiyaar said...

You write simple but deep....
all the best for your life...

ur orkut friend...
Amritt R


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R.Rajarajan said...

hi friend nice works
i am really proud to have a such a wonderful friend u keep going on ur way